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SHE CRYS ALONE
Contributed by
emystar
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Tuesday, 10th November 2009 @ 09:22:13 PM in AEST
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She told Mr. police what her dad does.
Mommy calls the hot line to help.
His lies and deciet keeps her away.
Now he keeps her all to himself.
God, she crys alone, wanting Mommy,
After Daddy molests her innocense.
Her Mommy crys for her little girl.
It just don't make any sense.
Such an angel caught in systems.
She knows dad doesn't really care.
He keeps her from Mom and all.
His sexual pleasure's why she's still there.
God release her from his selfish hell.
She's only three, now wrecked for life.
There's no rush to save this angel child.
Paper work, interveiws, nothing but lies.
She knows mommy cries for her too.
Her little girl's the one he abuse alone.
Please release her, Jesus, you know
our little angel just wants to come home
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Re: SHE CRYS ALONE
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by northernlights on
Tuesday, 10th November 2009 @ 11:09:38 PM AEST
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| I can feel the anger frustration and sadness of not being able to do anything to protect an innocent life.This brought tears |
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Re: SHE CRYS ALONE
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by spud on
Wednesday, 11th November 2009 @ 01:23:40 AM AEST
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Touching and sad. A violation of innocence!
Tommy
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Re: SHE CRYS ALONE
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by Xnoybis on
Wednesday, 11th November 2009 @ 06:53:35 AM AEST
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| I like the directness of this. |
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Re: SHE CRYS ALONE
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by karoody on
Wednesday, 11th November 2009 @ 02:59:17 PM AEST
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((((emy)))))
this one just tears my heart up
it needed to be said though
thank you
kara |
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Re: SHE CRYS ALONE
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by longhaircg on
Wednesday, 11th November 2009 @ 03:40:46 PM AEST
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so sad, this hit me deep, good write
sp |
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Re: SHE CRYS ALONE
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by laststarontheleft on
Thursday, 12th November 2009 @ 08:59:43 AM AEST
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Wow, this is so powerful, it made me cry.
How anyone could be so evil and self loathing that they could inflict such wickedness upon another - and to a little babe is beyond speech. I'm truly sorry. It really spoke to me, thankyou for sharing it even though how hard it must have been x x x |
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Re: SHE CRYS ALONE
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by ladyfawn on
Tuesday, 24th November 2009 @ 05:27:54 PM AEST
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i hope hes put away for a longgggg time, excellent heart wrenching write,
hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: SHE CRYS ALONE
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by Puppy_dog_eyes on
Friday, 27th November 2009 @ 04:51:03 PM AEST
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Perhaps a subject many think about but few are brave enough to tackle poetically.
Great work
Steve |
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Re: SHE CRYS ALONE
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by Tory on
Thursday, 4th February 2010 @ 06:05:18 PM AEST
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| This was so heart breaking, It just made me cry, Men like that should just be shot, I could sense the caring of this childs well being, I hope this is not something that has happened with you, very well put out for everyone to understand,I could feel your anger but the compassion too God bless you good write, |
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Re: SHE CRYS ALONE
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 11th February 2010 @ 03:25:38 PM AEST
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| This is a really heart wrenching poem. Good job! |
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Re: SHE CRYS ALONE
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by aidoman on
Saturday, 27th February 2010 @ 03:07:08 AM AEST
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| if every incident was writing about im sure it would be a rarity, but its not and thats a shame. your words mean alot. nice write |
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Re: SHE CRYS ALONE
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by robsalinas on
Sunday, 28th February 2010 @ 06:30:04 PM AEST
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amazingly written, very very sad
its heartbreaking to know stuff like this happens :( writings like this break open many perspectives though
heartfelt answer to girls in this situation
keep it up! :) |
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Re: SHE CRYS ALONE
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by allforyou on
Tuesday, 3rd August 2010 @ 11:20:55 AM AEST
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This is a verrry powerful poem. I could feel my heart frowning as I read the first line.
-Kara |
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Re: SHE CRYS ALONE
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by jamesatteb on
Friday, 12th November 2010 @ 10:06:18 PM AEST
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wow ! tragic and so true too!
there are too many systems and not enough ppl who care enoughto say forget the paperwork and move on it.
very sad and tragicaly true.
beautiful work !!
*huggs * |
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Re: SHE CRYS ALONE
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by UpsAndDowns on
Monday, 15th November 2010 @ 11:55:30 AM AEST
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| I deal with this in my job as a social worker. People are afraid to talk about it. I am glad you were able to put it down in words for peope to try and understand. You also caught the system well, sometimes putting aside people/children for the paperwork and etc. Lovely. |
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Re: SHE CRYS ALONE
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by whitt on
Saturday, 11th December 2010 @ 04:55:21 PM AEST
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this is so tear jerking :(
i wish it wasnt a true thing
its sooo sad to even think about
-whittley |
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Re: SHE CRYS ALONE
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by huwbeauty on
Wednesday, 19th January 2011 @ 07:40:13 AM AEST
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| I don't know what to say other than this is a very harrowing write that has really upset me,there are some simply evil people in the world. |
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Re: SHE CRYS ALONE
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by Anoo on
Wednesday, 19th January 2011 @ 08:36:38 AM AEST
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You have written beautiful and tactful verses on a subject matter that rarely anyone would choose to write a poem about. But you have made a very touching poem on a very sad incident.
I love the way you presented it. |
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Re: SHE CRYS ALONE
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by Deadson on
Friday, 25th February 2011 @ 02:26:42 AM AEST
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| These words are killers.. I feel for the child, for the mother, and even for the man.. The little girl is the deepest tragedy trapped in a "home" of nightmare, the mother in being powerless to the situation due to "legality" is a close second, but i just can't help but to wonder.. what it takes to drive a person (if we can call him one) to such a pathetic low... What was he a victim of, and why does he feel the need, or have the desire to pass his pain along to anyone.. let alone his own daughter? |
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