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A Man Must Find His Footing
Contributed by
one-curly-fry
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Monday, 9th November 2009 @ 08:17:12 PM in AEST
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anguished
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A man must find his own
before his flesh is stripped from bone
before he lets her take his pride
under love’s guise, by his side
The bleeding heart will bleed dry
the lover will hear the final goodbye
nothing good comes from being a S.N.A.G.
just the abuse of being a rag
No, a man needs to find his own
build strong that private home
a fortified strong-hold to save his soul
or self-respect may pay the toll
sacrificed to a demi-god love
empty promises to lift above
to a wonderful Shakespearian escape
can’t you see; it’s all a mistake!
Dear man, look after your being
the truth of her is not what you’re seeing
she is just a person like you or I
and just as able to create a lie.
10/11/2009
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Re: A Man Must Find His Footing
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by northernlights on
Monday, 9th November 2009 @ 11:43:26 PM AEST
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| Building your own life as a person before taking the risk of relationships with others a very wise poem and I love the warning."the truth of her is not what you're seeing." |
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Re: A Man Must Find His Footing
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by spud on
Tuesday, 10th November 2009 @ 05:06:45 AM AEST
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Hi,
I like this. And at the risk of appearing sexist,
mainly because it's from a man's perspective,
indicating that vulnerability can also be part
of the 'male' psyche.
Touching and well versed!
Tommy
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Re: A Man Must Find His Footing
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by lostsoul17 on
Tuesday, 24th November 2009 @ 02:02:44 PM AEST
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| beautiful im not a man but some times a women can feel the same way. very deep and honest many men cant see past the lies a women can build. but it goes the other way to! :P |
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Re: A Man Must Find His Footing
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by MorguesMatter on
Tuesday, 1st December 2009 @ 02:20:09 AM AEST
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| These words are not those of a fool who is to be fooled again.-Morgues |
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