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Wish
Contributed by
xnoybis
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Monday, 9th November 2009 @ 03:28:48 AM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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I want your last breath
To exhale into me
And give me the words
That you might have spoken
In your best days
The words you never shared with me
The words I never asked for
The words I never shared with you
Our mundane words
That we consider a bore
I want my last breath
To exhale into someone
And give them the words
That makes my corpse
Shine with sun rays
The words I never shared with you
The words you never asked for
The words you never shared with me
Our mundane words
Rightfully considered a bore
Because they lived
Like we did
A chore
I want our last breaths
To wrap our words
In the magic that
We always tried to give them
A wish in one hand..
Copyright ©
xnoybis
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2009-11-09 03:28:48]
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Re: Wish
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by mysticmercury on
Monday, 9th November 2009 @ 04:00:24 AM AEST
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| ...great work...that ending just explodes!! |
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Re: Wish
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by emystar on
Monday, 9th November 2009 @ 09:32:43 AM AEST
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Very creative and thought provoking.
Good work.
huggs, blessings,
emy |
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