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wait
Contributed by
ming
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Monday, 9th November 2009 @ 01:43:06 AM in AEST
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for nothing
palmed kiss
empty in my pocket
good grace
abandoned
spellbinder lost
mean what I
matter between
then and now
what was wanted
and who not
thrown rainbows
over behind
a tuneless dance
tiptoes my feet.
Copyright ©
ming
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2009-11-09 01:43:06]
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Re: wait
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by mysticmercury on
Monday, 9th November 2009 @ 04:06:35 AM AEST
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| ...its amazing how this very short poem can have this maturity!! great write.... |
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Re: wait
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 9th November 2009 @ 02:45:24 PM AEST
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A nice piece, wonderfully ended I thought.
-Phil |
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