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on rainy day
Contributed by
apartment213
on
Wednesday, 2nd April 2003 @ 11:45:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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so u feel stuck angry sexual frustration
so u feel wise beyond ur years
so u wanna feel loved no longer starved
how many times have u cried for peace
or cried urself to sleep
what all this mean is simple therapy
the sunrise might be ur only dependability
ive dug this grave now i can die in humility
when ur out and lost count
u've had ur name all over town
how do u chalk up a loss
when will u admit jesus is a bad boss
i'd just like to say there's no forever
so u had no choice that man stated his case
so u wake up on broken glasses and a lovely bruise
so u wanna feel loved no longer starved
there's a guaranteed heaven next to the dishes
feelings on rainy days ah these rainy days
how all this happiness dies in ur face
ive dug this grave now i can die in humility
when ur out and lost count
u've had ur name all over town
how do u chalk up a loss
when will u admit jesus is a bad boss
i'd just like to say there's no forever
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Re: on rainy day
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by karoody on
Friday, 4th April 2003 @ 03:09:48 AM AEST
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Kenny,
You did a great job on this one. I hope you can always find your outlet.
Hugs,
Kara |
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Re: on rainy day
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by MoonlitAngel on
Friday, 4th April 2003 @ 12:39:19 PM AEST
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I like this! Great job! Blessed be,
~ Moonlit Angel |
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Re: on rainy day
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by AngryPrincess on
Sunday, 13th April 2003 @ 01:12:09 PM AEST
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kenny, i definitely can relate... :O) this one made me cry. God, so much of that makes so much sense... Thank you. I like this one best of all. Because i live for rainy days.
Lindsey :O) |
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Re: on rainy day
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by Wrybod on
Thursday, 17th April 2003 @ 02:28:40 AM AEST
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Oh you venture onto stormy seas in this one alright.
Wish I hadn't come
too rough for me.
too vividly portrayed. |
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