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Basics
Contributed by
elle
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Sunday, 8th November 2009 @ 08:09:18 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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I love you.
It is a great motivation.
For me to love is to commit myself, freely
& without reservation.
I am sincerely interested in you,
your happiness & well being.
Whatever your needs are
I will try to fulfill them.
I value you.
Depending on the importance of your need,
I will bend.
If you are lonely & need me
I will be there.
If, in that loneliness
you need to talk
I will listen.
If you need to listen
I will talk.
If you need the comfort
of human touch
I will touch you
as you have touched my heart.
Copyright ©
elle
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2009-11-08 08:09:18]
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Re: Basics
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by dirk-velvet on
Sunday, 8th November 2009 @ 06:00:50 PM AEST
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"MARRY ME"
! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !
( the power of .... ... powerful words )
Beautiful Write ! |
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Re: Basics
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 8th November 2009 @ 10:36:29 PM AEST
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WOW! He is one freaking blessed son-of-a-gun.
Even though this is an excellent conveyance of the love, dedication, and devotion you are willing to offer, I find the title another gift of your talent to get a point across with so few (or one) words.
The "basics" is all we really need but so many human beings are unable to even perform the "basics" as you so wonderfully describe them here. Funny how something that seems so basic to one can be difficult or maybe even impossible for another to do. I guess it's another talent that not everyone has.
Admittedly Envious Tim
who wishes someday a poem like this is written for him
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