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Heart Of Gold
Contributed by
Kev
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Saturday, 7th November 2009 @ 06:01:55 PM in AEST
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A thought in head with pills on the bed, saw the way the world was working and didn’t like what was surrounding, thoughts of yesterday flashed back and made tears fall from eyes once innocent and pure, crying to sleep with thoughts of death being so sweet, it could come so slow or so fast but hopefully it won’t last, in time of need praying it comes in Gods speed and if life were a dream may I awake and if a nightmare than I pray I be deaths to take….
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Kev
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2009-11-07 18:01:55]
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Re: Heart Of Gold
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by lesoleilnoire on
Saturday, 7th November 2009 @ 06:12:15 PM AEST
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Good emotional piece. I'm glad you are at a happier place in your life now. Nice job!
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Re: Heart Of Gold
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by Fuzzy on
Thursday, 12th November 2009 @ 10:29:03 PM AEST
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| I know that place, Take care |
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Re: Heart Of Gold
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by laststarontheleft on
Friday, 13th November 2009 @ 08:27:00 AM AEST
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This is very moving. It reminds me
of feelings I had as a teenager, but, gladly
we are both much happier now!
Best wishes.... Last Star x x x |
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