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Troubled waters
Contributed by
allidoiswrite82
on
Saturday, 7th November 2009 @ 12:56:48 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Troubled waters have ravaged my wonderland
Waves have crashed down on the solitude that protected my sanity
Drowned the passions that I hold so dear to me
The rains have come and gone
Then come again
Saturating my thoughts
Dripping about the pages that hold my fears
Entwined with this poets tears
Forcing the words written to escape these pages
My inked words dry so slowly against the moisture
These Troubled Waters
Have forced evacuations of my images
Flushed them into raging waters
Suffocated my words
Left them muffled and misunderstood
And in Truth I stood
Facing the very current that seeks to pull me under
I'm so far gone
So unreachable
So unteachable
Along this poets own natural disaster
Finding that I am far from
Unbreakable
I am much more like unmistakably
Shakable
Weary legs fight to uphold this unstable mind
In these Troubled Waters
My boarders have been breached by burden
Because these clouds rain so much
That I cant see the sky
My eyes cried so much
Its Impossible to say goodbyes
And Hellos are meaningless
Meaning this
I have already lost the battle with my sorrows
Conquered by my woes
I am no match for my foes
That I've named
Sadness
The other
Misery
My fate is submerged in these troubled waters
Just under the ripples lay
The pain of yesteryear
Crippled by fear
And here
Is where you will find me
Alone
Scared
Broken
In these
Troubled Waters
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allidoiswrite82
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2009-11-07 12:56:48]
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Re: Troubled waters
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by lesoleilnoire on
Saturday, 7th November 2009 @ 06:14:55 PM AEST
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Amazing write. I can visualize this so vividly!. You have true talent of words.
Heidi |
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Re: Troubled waters
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by redwest802 on
Tuesday, 16th July 2019 @ 01:14:57 AM AEST
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You are a Wordsmith, i like this.
I would advise spending a few minutes on Punctuation as it will make a world of difference. |
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