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The Grip
Contributed by
musicalwords
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Saturday, 7th November 2009 @ 12:36:11 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Why am I tortured by my own head
I feel pain and sadness grip me like a vice
I'm going to explode
Noone to save me
Noone to loosen the grip
I scream at my head and at God to make it stop
Give me sense, give me the reason
Most of all give me happiness and love beyond explanation
Give me understanding
Someone understand me, WANT to understand me
But my brain it says NO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
YES!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Which way is right?
Which way is wrong?
Someone loosen the grip and hold me as I recover from the pain.
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Re: The Grip
(User Rating: 1 )
by redwest802 on
Tuesday, 16th July 2019 @ 01:08:33 AM AEST
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A very deep write about your mind. well done.
If i may suggest. Spend a few minutes on punctuation
. It can make a good piece of work into a great piece of work. Keep it up, I like this one. |
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Re: The Grip
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by Beyfoxman5 on
Friday, 27th November 2020 @ 03:55:34 PM AEST
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| Powerful. Has me like a vice. I feel this. Best, Fox |
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