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Failure's Lament
Contributed by
Cancer
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Wednesday, 2nd April 2003 @ 10:45:00 PM in AEST
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i thought that when i moved out on my own
things would surely change
i thought that constantly ***** up, for me
was just a phase
but, now i see that it is a shadow
that will trail me all my life
the disappointment i once caused my dad
is now transferred to my wife
i guess i shouldn't ***** about it
i suppose i shouldn't cry
i don't deserve to get this off my chest
i guess all i deserve is to die
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2003-04-02 22:45:00]
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Re: Failure's Lament
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by Kindredblood_dragon on
Friday, 4th April 2003 @ 11:13:13 PM AEST
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A sad way to look at life, if all you see is failure, then I think you should look again!
It was still a good write, maybe poetry, isnt a failure, since I dont read crap. |
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Re: Failure's Lament
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by Destiny on
Monday, 21st April 2003 @ 12:43:04 PM AEST
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| I feel what you're saying... one thing can ***** up your entire life. |
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Re: Failure's Lament
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by Essentially9 on
Monday, 14th June 2004 @ 09:29:54 PM AEST
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| very emotional write. well no one deserves to die, and if you did deserve to be dead then you would be buried already. so you deserve another day to live in someone's eyes. find out how you fail and change your tactics when trying to succeed. |
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