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show me words
Contributed by
longhaircg
on
Thursday, 5th November 2009 @ 09:44:05 AM in AEST
Topic:
FriendshipPoetry
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look through your words are shown,
person of great faith, scars show on your face,
heart filled with hope,
little boy filled with joy,
little sparkel of light, beam to dream upon,
words set you free, destined you are meant to be,
little crack of sanity,
slight beam it may seem, busrting like the sun,
this far come dont look back, dont take two steps back,
because its a trap,
put your face in the breeze,
live with ease,
feel the son, life it brings on angels wings,
hear your words you write, they let me see,
who you are , what you can be,
I feel your heart, thats a start,
just between you and me.
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longhaircg
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2009-11-05 09:44:05] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: show me words
(User Rating: 1 ) by lovingcritters on
Tuesday, 17th November 2009 @ 06:48:39 PM AEST (User
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Beautiful descriptive words, romantic, touching, endearing, and so full of life with much feeling.
This is excellent in my opinion.......
You have millions of beautiful poems yet to write...............Keep up the get work dear...........
Warm love
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