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hurt
Contributed by
samii
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Thursday, 5th November 2009 @ 08:01:41 AM in AEST
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you said we're friends
i guess that all depends.
a real friend wouldn't hurt me like you did
and i have to keep it all hid
when i see you, you just grin
and all the flashbacks begin
i hated the feeling of your cold skin
the way you touched me
is discusting
i hate you and your sick pleasure
while i lay there and shiver
you have messed me up for life
threatening me with your pocket knife
if i could go back
id rather you kill me
then i wouldn't have this memory.
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samii
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2009-11-05 08:01:41]
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Re: hurt
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by shelby on
Thursday, 5th November 2009 @ 11:42:26 AM AEST
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Samii,
I just finished reading your poem about your dad, now I see this one. This is very disturbing to me. Have you told anyone about this and what happened? If not I think that you should. I am sad to see all the pain that has been inflicted upon you. Do not suffer in silence, please please go to someone for help.
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Re: hurt
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by Ambivalence on
Thursday, 5th November 2009 @ 03:41:34 PM AEST
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portrayed here is betrayal, ire, and injustice. i know exactly what you've expressed here, lot of us have been there, i know i have. but payback isn't worth it, it makes u no better. just try to let it go...
take care
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Re: hurt
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by spud on
Friday, 6th November 2009 @ 07:41:39 AM AEST
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Hi,
I've just read your 'daddy dearest' and now this
one. You're pouring out your sadness and
misery. You need to talk with someone external
of those who are making your life difficult. You
do NOT have to take all of this and feel deserving
of it in any way! You DON'T deserve it!
I'm guessing you're female - so go sweetheart, and
talk with someone who can help!
God go with you!
Tommy
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