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A Leak of the Heart
Contributed by
lesoleilnoire
on
Wednesday, 4th November 2009 @ 08:28:38 PM in AEST
Topic:
anguished
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Thump, Thump
My heart mournfully beats.
Drip, Drip,
Love inside slowly leaks.
Whoosh, Whoosh
Blood flows in life's river.
Splish, Splash
droplets of blood dantilly descending in a puddle,
Silence
Love has drowned in blood's puddle.
Copyright ©
lesoleilnoire
... [
2009-11-04 20:28:38] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: A Leak of the Heart
(User Rating: 1 ) by emystar on
Wednesday, 4th November 2009 @ 08:44:21 PM AEST (User
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Sad but very creative,
Blessings,
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Re: A Leak of the Heart
(User Rating: 1 ) by Puppy_dog_eyes on
Friday, 6th November 2009 @ 02:27:06 PM AEST (User
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Short but sharp.........nothing wasted
Great write
Steve |
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