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Caught in the Current of Love
Contributed by
muskiewoman
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Wednesday, 4th November 2009 @ 01:18:28 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Raging river of emotion plunges down stream
Sweeping life into its current never to set free
Powerful rapids over whelm pulling me deep
Surging torrent drown flooding my empty spirit with wanted devotion
Relentless struggling and fighting fierce
Tried swimming swiftly the other way free
Quickly moving rapids seize ones soul
Ones heart caught in the current of love
Copyright ©
muskiewoman
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2009-11-04 13:18:28]
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Re: Caught in the Current of Love
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by karoody on
Wednesday, 4th November 2009 @ 02:18:42 PM AEST
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A wonderful description
I enjoyed feeling this image
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Re: Caught in the Current of Love
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by Jenni_K on
Wednesday, 11th November 2009 @ 11:52:29 AM AEST
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Absolutely loved the title..and was caught up in the imagery of this..Great write..
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Re: Caught in the Current of Love
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by dirk-velvet on
Friday, 13th November 2009 @ 09:35:15 AM AEST
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Your words build the image as the current flows.
Taking ones mind into the swell itself.
(You have a wonderful talent)
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