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Wait
Contributed by
muskiewoman
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Wednesday, 4th November 2009 @ 01:15:23 PM in AEST
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EmotionalPoetry
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The tea kettle has been filled with love
Sit and wait to watch it boil
I can taste the hot soothing brew
Maybe the kettle is filled too high
Sit and wait to hear it whistle
I can see the steam rising from the cup
Maybe the flame is to low
Sit and wait to hear it boil
I can feel the warmth in my soul
Maybe the burner isn’t on
Sit and wait …
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2009-11-04 13:15:23]
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Re: Wait
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by karoody on
Wednesday, 4th November 2009 @ 02:23:11 PM AEST
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Sounds like me in the morning
Did I even turn it on?
Geesh, I forgot the water again...
lol
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Re: Wait
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 6th November 2009 @ 07:20:12 PM AEST
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omigosh ... this is amazingly profound.
And the waiting ??? oh GOD! How I get that. Damn. This was
like a page from my very own book. In fact SEVERAL pages.
They are filled with waiting ... wanting and waiting ...waiting
and wanting. What an incredible analogy you've described.
Wonderful post!
~ Breezy
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