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The Other Realm
Contributed by
deadwriter
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Wednesday, 4th November 2009 @ 12:27:17 PM in AEST
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Lifepoems
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The Other Realm
For years I would harbor my doubts and fears
Deep within my soul, a few would leak out as tears
While others would cast dreams into the wishing well
My tears would never hit bottom when in there they fell
Events forced my doubts and fears to flow like rain
It was a time of terrible tribulation and pain
During that time my tears finally splashed
When into the bottom of the well they crashed
While waiting for the echoing to end
My hopes and dreams I did see ascend
New vision was presented for me to see how
Once again I could focus on the here and now
Plan for tomorrow and live for today
I am learning more that I should live this way
If I let go of the doubts and fears
There will only be joyous tears
With this new vision I can clearly see
The gift with which God has so blessed me
Contained within my hopes and dreams and visions anew
I found one common factor, they all encircled you
Deadwriter
11/03/2009
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Re: The Other Realm
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by mooshken26 on
Wednesday, 4th November 2009 @ 12:29:31 PM AEST
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| This is beautifully written - thank you for a wonderful read. |
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Re: The Other Realm
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by Jenni_K on
Wednesday, 4th November 2009 @ 12:42:57 PM AEST
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Simply beautiful.....Love the positive note...
Hugs
Me |
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Re: The Other Realm
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by Ambivalence on
Wednesday, 4th November 2009 @ 05:20:29 PM AEST
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wow...poems like these make my day
so well written and effective as always
this is one of your most uplifting poems so far
take care
-K.Z. |
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Re: The Other Realm
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by shelby on
Wednesday, 4th November 2009 @ 05:55:21 PM AEST
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My friend, I have been in emotional overload and this poem made me cry but this time is it tears of joy and warmth. This is so full of wisdom, heart, wise and sage. I feel hope, and I am so dang happy that you have these feelings, so uplifting and postive. Yes I am moved, the ground around me is now shaking! I am so so happy for you! Thanks for sharing this with us!
Hugs N Kiss!
Michelle
and thank you for always being such a great friend to me, I love you! I am blessed and grateful to have you in my life. |
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Re: The Other Realm
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 14th November 2009 @ 03:29:12 PM AEST
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| This is an awesome poem. Can't wait to read more! |
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