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A New Beginning

Contributed by MoonlightKiss on Tuesday, 3rd November 2009 @ 03:02:28 PM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

I dare to listen to the whisper of my heart
Take in the beauty of this world's art
Breathe in the essence of your sweet skin
Enlightened, I watch this new life begin.
I dare to look into your gorgeous eyes
Wake to find such a beautiful surprise
It's like I've been asleep in this place
And now I'm free in your warm embrace.
I dare to bathe in your ocean of love
Make a wish on the stars that live above
Listen to the sound; our hearts beat as one
This feeling makes me proud of all I have done.
I dare to hand over my heart to you
Wake to find that you've given yours too
Perhaps not all hope is gone; there's a trace
For I see faith written all over your face.
I dare to stand out from the crowd
We'll break away; be different; be loud
Watch as you promise the world to me
Yet I don't need it; don't you see?
I dare to love with such devotion
Break me open and examine the emotion
Hold on to this passion; wrapped in a cast
Just love me, and I know we'll make it last.
I dare to make this last forever
Take in the destiny of a world so clever
Breathe in the potential from within
Together, we'll watch our new life begin.

Copyright © MoonlightKiss ... [ 2009-11-03 15:02:28]
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Re: A New Beginning (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 4th November 2009 @ 05:13:07 AM AEST
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Nicely done, there were some beautiful sentiments and emotions in this and it all came together wonderfully.

-Phil

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