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peace as muse
Contributed by
elle
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Monday, 2nd November 2009 @ 05:35:12 PM in AEST
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grant me remedy. . .
without exception
without compromise
but not without withdrawal
from the pain inspired of life
distilled
into pools of moonglow
reflected
fragments of misconception
grant me notice. . .
the collage of struggle
beyond staggered window panes
transformed into stained-glass vis-a'-vis
as vapors unto vapors
& voice. . .
puffy pink clouds, wisping
that assume the shape of lips
antidoting lies
multiplied by truths
that disengage forever. . .
lift me higher
subdued with fragrant anticipation
eyelids trembling, fibers pulsing
every known particle wavering
into the organs
that co-exist with the sublime
morphemic distraction
enter the muse
whose eyes compile infinity
into an iris of cerulean & indigo base
bestowing
stroke & flow
stone & grind
plume & glistening doubt
sprinkled
upon the wind
resembling wing. . .
so that I may find my way
Copyright ©
elle
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2009-11-02 17:35:12]
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Re: peace as muse
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by shelby on
Monday, 2nd November 2009 @ 08:49:03 PM AEST
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Elle,
I am always drawn to each beautiful word in your poetry.
Beautiful work sweety!
Hugs
Michelle |
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Re: peace as muse
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by ming on
Monday, 2nd November 2009 @ 09:03:27 PM AEST
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Oh my Goddess Elle! Amazing! If I had to choose a favorite/best of yours this would be the ONE! But don't make me....;)
love,
ming |
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Re: peace as muse
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 3rd November 2009 @ 12:28:41 AM AEST
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| Goodness gracious; an exquisite masterpiece that actually had me saying words that I cannot type here. ... enter the muse is an understatement compared to what you can do with words!!!! |
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Re: peace as muse
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by spud on
Tuesday, 3rd November 2009 @ 01:38:49 AM AEST
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Hi Elle,
Excellent! Music in words!
Tommy
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Re: peace as muse
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by Daylynn_Van_Wyk on
Tuesday, 3rd November 2009 @ 02:41:17 AM AEST
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| Wow! That was macnificent, i doubt i'd find the words to discribe how much i enjoyed it, but know this is a truly a beautiful poem, thanx 4 sharing:) day-day |
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Re: peace as muse
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 5th November 2009 @ 12:40:44 PM AEST
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| Remarkable that is you =) |
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Re: peace as muse
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by karoody on
Thursday, 5th November 2009 @ 01:34:15 PM AEST
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This piece indeed breathed beauty
I was completely in the words
from beginning to end
Smiles
Kara |
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