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Bully punch down
Contributed by
adamski
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Monday, 2nd November 2009 @ 04:23:59 PM in AEST
Topic:
AngryPoetry
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Smack bang in the middle of the rubbish,
Smish, smash, with the clish, clash of the fist bash,
Punch, crunch, with 5 as a bunch ,
Left and right, swish, swosh of air,
Swosh, swish and yank, pull the hair,
To swing and woosh, I値l smash your moosh,
Get in my way, I値l bash to decay,
Knock you down, crack on the crown,
Stand tall and proud, I値l please my crowd,
To see you fall, crush crush so small,
You little man, I値l watch you frown,
Beaten, trodden, on the floor,
Tired and broken, you値l fight no more.
Copyright ﾂｩ
adamski
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2009-11-02 16:23:59]
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Re: Bully punch down
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by shelby on
Monday, 2nd November 2009 @ 08:55:29 PM AEST
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Oh ouch! You made my bones ache while reading this lol.
I do understand it though, when I was little my brother and I were always getting whooped on because we were small lol, then one day we grew up and did a bit of pay back as well...... Though these days I dont think more violence fixes it ya know?
Liked the high energy and flow to this it seemed like a fight, creative write.
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Re: Bully punch down
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by Spike on
Tuesday, 3rd November 2009 @ 04:02:30 AM AEST
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give the bugger a few alliterative swipes for me, too!. Unexpectedly satisfying.
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Re: Bully punch down
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by simonwrite on
Tuesday, 3rd November 2009 @ 09:01:45 AM AEST
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| i really liked it. good use of sounds and descriptive words. made feel like i was there getting the snot beaten out of me |
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Re: Bully punch down
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by MorguesMatter on
Sunday, 8th November 2009 @ 12:08:57 PM AEST
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| Made me smile-Morgues |
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