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You say that you want to take your life part two
Contributed by
Voice of the Silent
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Monday, 2nd November 2009 @ 03:20:27 PM in AEST
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I’ve used some of these before so the translation maybe unnecessary but all the same.
Sanctus Espiritus means Holy Spirit…many of you may know I’m not much for religion but my friend needs me so I’ll make an exception.
Libera Nos a Malo Deliver us from evil or liberate us from evil it’s the same
Did you just fall to pieces?
Who will be the one to release us?
I can’t do this for you
But what I’m I to do
You know I care
So you want me there
You want me to place this noose around your neck
And let you swing like a church bell
You’re going to hell
You say you don’t want to go being alone
But you’re on your on your own
I want no part in this
You say this escape will be bliss
Let me tell you friend
There is no after there’s just an end
Forget what torments your soul
Make this demon let you go
You have the will power
But you insist this is your final hour
Sanctus Espiritus, Libera Nos A Malo
My heart gone hollow
With the sorrow
You’ve forced unto me
Can’t you see?
You have much to live for
There are many doors in life
Shut this one that a different path
Take life
Copyright ©
Voice of the Silent
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2009-11-02 15:20:27]
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Re: You say that you want to take your life part two
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by karoody on
Monday, 2nd November 2009 @ 04:40:05 PM AEST
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A heavy burden for one to carry
Your friend needs to see the blessing
Of having someone that loves them
Someone who I know will always listen
And never, never judges
People like that are so hard to find
To be blessed with one at all
Is such a beautiful thing
Best of luck to you
And thank you for sharing
Such a heartfelt piece
Hugs and love to you always
Kara
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Re: You say that you want to take your life part two
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by shelby on
Monday, 2nd November 2009 @ 08:42:44 PM AEST
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I admire you, this is a hard spot to be in. Iv been there many times and to be honest these days I just do not think I have it in me anymore. So again, good for you! This poem is well written and so moving it left me with a couple tears tonight.........
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Re: You say that you want to take your life part two
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by emystar on
Tuesday, 3rd November 2009 @ 04:00:51 PM AEST
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Wow Kelly,
You've just writen a very touching masterpeice.
One can tell you put your heart-n-soul into this write.
Bravo, bravo, take a bow 'cause you've earned it. Yeah, I know that's the last thing your thinking about. Still I'm very proud of you.
big huggs, blessings,
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