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Unforgettable
Contributed by
daylynn_van_wyk
on
Monday, 2nd November 2009 @ 12:37:58 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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A gallant romance
The placid moments of tenderness
Immune to the pearls of winter
A safe haven for love to rest.
A goddess fabricated within sight
Kept by gorgeous gaiety attire,
The colors of love surrounded
Slaking the longing of an endless desire.
Solitude vanished in the skyline
The peaceful beauty of a desert storm,
A presence warmed with a celestial charm
An angel materialized and took form.
The sweetest metaphors invited
Then a dull spectrum took new shine,
A few beats took panic,
But a smile blossomed from a joyous find.
Love pulsated through every fiber,
A love which two hearts knew was in-effort able,
An intimate slow dance transcended
Like magic…. It was truly unforgettable.
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daylynn_van_wyk
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2009-11-02 12:37:58]
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Re: Unforgettable
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by spud on
Monday, 2nd November 2009 @ 02:23:13 PM AEST
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Yip! This old man remembers a few magic moments
like this.
Thanks for the memories!
Tommy
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Re: Unforgettable
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by shelby on
Monday, 2nd November 2009 @ 09:25:50 PM AEST
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This is such a delightful poem it almost made me cry from the sheer beauty and joy found floating in each line. Thanks for sharing!
Hugs
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Re: Unforgettable
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by Daylynn_Van_Wyk on
Monday, 2nd November 2009 @ 09:36:36 PM AEST
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