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You want to end your life. part one
Contributed by
Voice of the Silent
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Sunday, 1st November 2009 @ 08:08:09 PM in AEST
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You say you want to end your life
Then take the knife
And cut it deep vertically
Don’t go horizontal, don’t do it half way do it right
Make yourself a noose
Make it fit your neck loose
You’ll know you did it right
When the rope pulls tight
If you go through
Then these are my final words to you
You’re a fool I show no sympathy
You won’t have my empathy
Don’t be foolish nothing to live for?
If you’re so blind the there’s the door
I’ll help if you if you really don’t care
I’m here live for me if that’s not enough
You can lie all you want about wanting to end your life
You’ll be sitting there holding the knife
Scared “what will happen on the other side”
Nothing for you my friend there’s no glory in suicide
You quit not because you have nothing to live for
You can’t handle it all; your making of the mind went loose
So here’s the door
Put noose around your neck
You I’ll never forget
You’re a fool but you’re a friend
Why do you want it to end?
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Voice of the Silent
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2009-11-01 20:08:09]
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Re: You want to end your life. part one
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 1st November 2009 @ 11:19:27 PM AEST
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Suicide is probably the ultimate selfish act. I understand the demons that makes one think of it but to go through with it shows how much the person is wrapped up in their own woes. When instead they need to stop and think of how it is affecting the people that love and value them. I understand this feeling of where you're coming from. I understand the anger.
Wish you the best with that and definitely do not envy you.
Take care,
Tim |
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Re: You want to end your life. part one
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by karoody on
Monday, 2nd November 2009 @ 03:23:21 PM AEST
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I truly appreciate you for what you have said here.
Watching someone in this state of mind is so heartbreaking.
I hope the person to whom this refers hears these words
that obviously come straight from the heart
Huge hugs
Kara |
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Re: You want to end your life. part one
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 2nd November 2009 @ 05:30:43 PM AEST
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Believe me, I know how much effort it takes to keep on fighting.
Tell your friend to never give up. Depression is like a long dark tunnel that seems to have no end, but with a lot of help and a lot more determination it CAN end.
Maybe I was just lucky, but I came out on the other side, and I look back now, thankful I didn't quit looking for a reason to go on living.
That's what your friend needs to do. Keep looking for a reason NOT to die. Be it family or friends or whatever, find a reason to LIVE.
You take on a very serious subject here. You have my greatest respect for doing so. |
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Re: You want to end your life. part one
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by shelby on
Monday, 2nd November 2009 @ 08:33:12 PM AEST
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I loved the fact you can get so honest here.
You know how I feel about suicide.....
I agree with everything Tim said to the letter.
Strong, powerful write.
I also agree with everyone elses thoughts too.
Hugs you
Michelle |
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