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No Dreams?
Contributed by
NoSaint
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Sunday, 1st November 2009 @ 12:11:15 PM in AEST
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“No dreams tonight.” Jasper said
As he tucked little Sandra into her bed
“But Daddy our dreams become our truth”
Jasper shook his head and figured just her youth
Sandra slept and with the fairies did play
Until night time became break of day
Off to school she went happy as a lark
Later to run with her brother in the park
Home later she found Jasper hands on his head
Crying I have no money so you can be fed
It is fine said Sandra all we need do is ask
I will find what we need it is a small task
So back to the park through the small woods
To where the fairy fountain stood
Sandra let out a shout of hello to her friends
And asked if some food for her family they send
Then home she went to a house filled with joy
For on the table was a feast, her brother a happy boy
“See Daddy” she said “My dreams are my truth”
“Never forget that always retain some of your youth”
“Our thoughts become things we need only chose
The good ones and we shall never truly lose
So let a small ember into a large fire grow
We chose our own destiny don’t you know”
Copyright ©
NoSaint
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2009-11-01 12:11:15]
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Re: No Dreams?
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by razorbladekisses on
Sunday, 1st November 2009 @ 02:06:54 PM AEST
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Awh; It's so cute.
I enjoyed the read, thank you!
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Re: No Dreams?
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 1st November 2009 @ 07:32:06 PM AEST
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Shari,
it's so nice to see a new post by you and what a wonderfully
inspirational post to find. :) It's been serendipitous this night.
Sweet, innocent and just a beautifully flowing write. And don't
even get me stared on the message. Bravo poet! Bravo!!
~ Breezy
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Re: No Dreams?
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by karoody on
Monday, 2nd November 2009 @ 03:52:54 PM AEST
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This was so beautiful
You have touched my heart with this
Love and hugs to you
Kara |
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Re: No Dreams?
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by Jenni_K on
Tuesday, 3rd November 2009 @ 05:51:18 PM AEST
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Such a beautiful and inspirational write, Shari.
It's great to see you posting again.
I hope all is well with you and your family.
Miss you..
Hugs
Jenni |
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Re: No Dreams?
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by simonwrite on
Wednesday, 4th November 2009 @ 04:40:00 PM AEST
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| pretty good. captures the innocence well |
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Re: No Dreams?
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by allforyou on
Tuesday, 3rd August 2010 @ 12:27:13 PM AEST
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This is inspiring. It actually gave me goosebumps so I pat you on the back for evoking emotion with your words. It is a wonderful, poetic story.
-Kara |
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