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Hollow Dreams
Contributed by
recyclebin
on
Saturday, 31st October 2009 @ 04:34:58 PM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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Dreams…..
Running through the woods…
Tonight alone again…
Alone again…
Broken and lost….
What am I suppose to do?
Through my eyes…
Every move, in slow motion…
A stranger in this vast world…
Inside I feel so cold….
I’m fading…..
Breathless….slowly turning into the mist…
Tonight what is my fate?
Distantly…
Through the tree line… I see light…
Running….
Closing my eyes….
Experiencing the fear….
I’m falling again…
A stranger in my own world…
Consumed …
Through the trees…
I fade….
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Re: Hollow Dreams
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 31st October 2009 @ 08:30:01 PM AEST
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OMG! The helplessness and the fear in this one. Damn fine job, my friend. This pretty much seems to sum up my life. |
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Re: Hollow Dreams
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by shelby on
Sunday, 1st November 2009 @ 10:43:11 PM AEST
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I relate and I feel it, nice word usage here it is a very prolific write.
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Re: Hollow Dreams
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by CapturedWings on
Tuesday, 3rd November 2009 @ 11:47:35 PM AEST
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Beautiful Write!
It makes the reader feel
apart of the dream!
I really did enjoy this poem.
Thank you for shareing with us all.
Capturedwings |
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