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If I could
Contributed by
LadyRose
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Friday, 30th October 2009 @ 09:39:33 AM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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If I could I would
give my life so that she can come back
but I can not replace her death.
If I could I would take away your pain,
swallow all the thorns of sorrow
just so you could see her again.
If I could I would
hold you,tell you every thing will be fine
but I cant,life wouldnt have it that way.
If i could I would
knock on heavens door and ask for her return
but I cant,she is already home...
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LadyRose
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2009-10-30 09:39:33]
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Re: If I could
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by northernlights on
Friday, 30th October 2009 @ 11:12:23 AM AEST
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| lovely warm empathic love flowing through this |
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Re: If I could
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by kye on
Friday, 30th October 2009 @ 11:44:16 AM AEST
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I certainly felt this deeply in my heart.
Having a friend like you during these times truly helps. My heart goes out to your friend.
The title "If I Could" truly was befitting.
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Re: If I could
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by b_lee on
Friday, 30th October 2009 @ 12:01:47 PM AEST
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| it's nice to see genuine sympathy |
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Re: If I could
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by spud on
Friday, 30th October 2009 @ 12:49:48 PM AEST
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Hi,
If we could? If only we could?
A superhuman gift to end all war, murder, rape, child abuse, pain, death ........
so we give what we have ....... comfort ..... and you've given it here in abundance.
Well written.
Tommy
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