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Again..with Vallu..

Contributed by mysticmercury on Thursday, 29th October 2009 @ 11:13:00 PM in AEST
Topic: dedicatedpoems

My Vallu, breathing in peace, silent,
Wait for him to choir, as before,
As the time he joined me..when I freed him
From that murky place, from that wretched lady.. ;-)

Vallu, my brown “guy” bear! Greatest foe of all Teddies,
Remember our game, who hates girl’s more??
Ha-ha, guess you are laughing too…
That same old smile, that tame blaze!

Still in wrath? For I abandoned you.
Well, no alibi; let our kudos’s be broken.
And just so you know; those joy, love and laughter,
Long forsaken, devoured by the stream.

How were you here? In this black hole,
And how shameless am I, to put the one here,
Who protected me from ghosts, all night long.
Maybe all this time you were wondering, why we are like this,

Why? I tell you why,
When I was four, you were my brother,
While the beast started to unwrap, my bough turned into a ghetto,
And I kicked you out; sending the lights along with you.

Can’t you see, it was I who were the real one to get thrown,
From neverland to wasteland.
Then to rot here, in this land of ours.

Now,
Dear Vallu, welcome back!
And I waited, long enough,
To give you this Teddy! Guess you are yearning too!
Let the days began,
Again!

Copyright Â© mysticmercury ... [ 2009-10-29 23:13:00]
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Re: Again..with Vallu.. (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Friday, 30th October 2009 @ 12:46:59 AM AEST
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This is a deep and well written tribute to your friend.

Nicely done

Michelle

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