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Roses
Contributed by
Clayman
on
Thursday, 29th October 2009 @ 06:46:27 AM in AEST
Topic:
anguished
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Your cursive pen bled crosses
on the parchments of my mind.
I grow weary of destroying you
every time your cistern soul
spews the ticks and leeches
in ballads of resurrection.
It's hard to kill something
that was never real.
Let me rip your wrists once more
to drain the puss of spite and malice.
Your heart carved from babylon root
is the silence singing in my wishes...
Maybe when I am done dying inside
temporal solace will bow no more.
Maybe.
I dare no longer stand idly by as
your heaving keg of sulfuric tears
defiles my thirst again.
The symphonic truths you defecate
will waste my entertainment no more.
I have peered into you
and counted the worms.
You promised me roses,
all I got was sins.
-Svw
Copyright ©
Clayman
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2009-10-29 06:46:27]
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Re: Roses
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by jaeann on
Thursday, 29th October 2009 @ 03:13:50 PM AEST
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| yes... sins indeed....all it takes is one promise broken....this was an amazing piece.....thank you for sharing.... |
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Re: Roses
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by Ambivalence on
Thursday, 29th October 2009 @ 04:13:42 PM AEST
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a poem of pain indeed,
your meticulous words tell it all.
dont forget the infamous thorns on the rose...
u deserve to rip this person's wrists,
but u shouldnt,
it only multiplies and spreads those thorns...
take care
-K.Z. |
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Re: Roses
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by LadyRose on
Friday, 30th October 2009 @ 09:25:10 AM AEST
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| how do you get all that emotions into these words?dont answer that.....I love this piece....very very deep..... |
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