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beautiful emerald eyes
Contributed by
elle
on
Wednesday, 28th October 2009 @ 06:18:01 PM in AEST
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when I realized
having you again
would not bring back our love
I gave up my grief
to the sun
& the moon
& the stars above. . .
Copyright ©
elle
... [
2009-10-28 18:18:01]
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Re: beautiful emerald eyes
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by ming on
Wednesday, 28th October 2009 @ 07:01:43 PM AEST
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Ahh...bittersweet at its best.
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Re: beautiful emerald eyes
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by emystar on
Wednesday, 28th October 2009 @ 09:25:53 PM AEST
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Very wise. This is definently a masterpeice of wisdom.
Very creative way of thinking.
Awesome, very powerful.
Huggs, blessings,
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Re: beautiful emerald eyes
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 29th October 2009 @ 08:58:42 PM AEST
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This brings a whole freaking lot to my mind but better not to print it here. However, I can say this...your power of communication and expression with words of very few will never cease to impress me.
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Re: beautiful emerald eyes
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by one-curly-fry on
Friday, 6th November 2009 @ 11:13:26 PM AEST
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as ur best at; u placed a strong piece in such a short, concise piece!! This is a powerful moment of realization well captured! I've been in that place before - sometimes it's needed for growth and change, hey?
Great write!
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