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Pretty Little Dum Dum

Contributed by Alexa_Bachtel on Wednesday, 28th October 2009 @ 01:27:19 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

I left when he had asked me to stay,
I turned away when he had begged me
To look into his eyes and see the truth.
I kept telling myself that he's history,
He means nothing to me at all anymore,
But my heart tells me who you're trying to convince.

Cos he still there,
And he's still waiting
Behind the closed door
He still loves you,
Pretty little dum dum,
So don't walk away,
Return and open this damn door,
Cos he still there, he still yours
So don't be pretty little dum dum.

She did it, it completely her blame,
She's the one who deserve being hatred,
Not him, even though he was in her arms,
Tasted the sweetness from her lips,
Having known beforehand that he betrays
I'm right if I want his heart to bleed,
I'm right if I want him to feel my pain,
But from other side, if I really love him
Is he worth it?

Cos he still there,
And he's still waiting
Behind the closed door
He still loves you,
Pretty little dum dum,
So don't walk away,
Return and open this damn door,
Cos he still there, he still yours
So don't be pretty little dum dum.

I'm mad as a Fury, I know this,
I'm ready to scratch his eyes out
For what he's done, for his betrayal,
But I won't make up decisions when I'm mad,
Cos he deserves everything I wanna do
To him, but if he wanted to leave, He'd do.
But now...

He still there,
And he's still waiting
Behind the closed door
He still loves you,
Pretty little dum dum,
So don't walk away,
Return and open this damn door,
Cos he still there, he still yours
So don't be pretty little dum dum.
Don't be pretty little dum dum...

Copyright © Alexa_Bachtel ... [ 2009-10-28 13:27:19]
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Re: Pretty Little Dum Dum (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Wednesday, 28th October 2009 @ 09:45:12 PM AEST
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This is creative writing and thinking at it's best.
Great job.
smiles, blessings,
emy

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