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Without You
Contributed by
Jason_Robert_Britt
on
Thursday, 1st August 2002 @ 07:00:15 AM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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Curling up
Crisp sheets
Alone
The bed we
Used to Share
Sleeping in 'til
Half past
Two
Will never
Quite
Compare
To restless nights
Held in your
Arms
The hunger
Which we
Fed
The life that
We used to
Share
Now lifeless
Cold and
Dead
Copyright ©
Jason_Robert_Britt
... [
2002-08-01 07:00:15] (Date/Time posted on
site)
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Re: Without You
(User Rating: 1 ) by Chrissie on
Thursday, 1st August 2002 @ 05:32:53 PM AEST (User
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You say a lot in a few words here Jason...a very poignant piece.
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Re: Without You
(User Rating: 1 ) by princesspurty on
Sunday, 1st September 2002 @ 11:10:24 AM AEST (User
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this is very good, and so well put! |
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Re: Without You
(User Rating: 1 ) by tinka_belle on
Wednesday, 2nd July 2003 @ 11:22:16 PM AEST (User
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so short yet sweet
straight to the point without being
to harsh
lovely poem
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