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Will he come knocking on the door?
Contributed by
shelby
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Tuesday, 27th October 2009 @ 07:40:03 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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This night is dark and cold.
Octobers breath chilling.
A few nights off from Halloween.
The sight is growing darker.
Night zombies gather each night.
Making noise that shakes the moon,
but the moon ran to hide
tucked herself in between the clouds.
Now the world out my window is dark.
The wind is moaning,
the rain starts and stops.
The night zombies are out there I know
I hear them, but I cannot see them.
Will they come knocking on the door?
more later.........
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shelby
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2009-10-27 19:40:03]
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Re: Will he come knocking on the door?
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by lesoleilnoire on
Tuesday, 27th October 2009 @ 07:53:29 PM AEST
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Great write. It capures Halloween's spookiness perfectly. It's funny, I often get spooked a few nights before Halloween. I have an overactive imagination. Your poem was great!
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Re: Will he come knocking on the door?
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by lovingcritters on
Tuesday, 27th October 2009 @ 09:04:45 PM AEST
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Celle this is mysterious, and leaves me wondering................''spooky too, I'm wondering if it has a double meaning?
Good poem, I enjoyed it.
Warm love
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Re: Will he come knocking on the door?
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 27th October 2009 @ 11:48:21 PM AEST
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And the suspense builds.  |
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Re: Will he come knocking on the door?
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by spud on
Wednesday, 28th October 2009 @ 04:06:20 AM AEST
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Hi Shel,
Great write! I'm glad I read it in the morning and
not before beddybyes!!
Scary ..........
Tommy
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Re: Will he come knocking on the door?
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by myheartsvoice on
Wednesday, 28th October 2009 @ 08:08:48 AM AEST
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Dark becomes you, i like this,
it's not so much a poem as it
is real enough to be a warning
of things to come, truly a lesson
in the macarbre . . .
((((Michelle))))
ty like wise for visiting my mansion. lol.
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Re: Will he come knocking on the door?
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by Ambivalence on
Wednesday, 28th October 2009 @ 03:31:49 PM AEST
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zombies eh? pretty scary, yet fun
when u blast their heads off...
anywho, this gave me an ominous chill.
and the 2nd stanza was ingenious
take care
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Re: Will he come knocking on the door?
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by karoody on
Thursday, 29th October 2009 @ 04:15:43 PM AEST
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Wow, you got me curious....
You can pull off so many styles.
I have always loved your work.
Keep up the great writing,
can't wait to read more
Hugs
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Re: Will he come knocking on the door?
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by deadwriter on
Thursday, 29th October 2009 @ 06:28:00 PM AEST
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A great beginning my friend.
Thank you for your continued support.
Deadwriter
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