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The Cold
Contributed by
Tiffyo4
on
Tuesday, 27th October 2009 @ 04:37:41 PM in AEST
Topic:
MiscPoems
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Sitting here in this dark cold room
makes me think about you .
Everytime the wind blows
i can feel you near.
As the hair on the back of my neck spikes
i can hear your voice whispering to me.
Whispering sweet nothings in my ears
it makes my heart beat faster and faster
The cold air makes it hard to breath
but your there to make it easier
come back to me my love
or the cold air will be for nothing
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Tiffyo4
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2009-10-27 16:37:41] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: The Cold
(User Rating: 1 ) by shelby on
Tuesday, 27th October 2009 @ 07:50:51 PM AEST (User
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I loved the way you made the reader feel the cold air.
Well done almost haunting.
Have a fun Halloween week
Michelle
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