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Four
Contributed by
jaeann
on
Tuesday, 27th October 2009 @ 10:58:42 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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the train roars by
every hour
on the
hour
and in between
you say you
never hear it
any more
just ignore it
you say
I can't
reminds me
of the city
and how
you were
never there
I can't ignore
things
the way
you do
Copyright ©
jaeann
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2009-10-27 10:58:42] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Four
(User Rating: 1 ) by shelby on
Tuesday, 27th October 2009 @ 09:28:27 PM AEST (User
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ahhhhh creative write........
I liked the train whistle too.... love that sound.
Loved this write.......
I do not ignore either.....
Michelle |
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