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Death Of An Inner Child
Contributed by
krystal33204
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Monday, 26th October 2009 @ 07:12:31 PM in AEST
Topic:
Grief
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Don't mourn for the shadow
Sitting in the dark.
It's intangiblity
so far reaching.
Meanin nothing to noone pleading for light.
A black rose dying a heart gone cold.
Your tears are pointless
Compared to tears I've shed
Don't cry for me for i'm already dead.
I sit back and wither.
This bottle my knife.
Falling further from a once meaningful ledge.
Don't bleed for me
cause i've already bled.
Alone in the world
Not alone in my bed
Now a plague on this corpse My inner child now dead
Copyright ©
krystal33204
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2009-10-26 19:12:31]
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Re: Death Of An Inner Child
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by psychodavis on
Monday, 26th October 2009 @ 07:45:15 PM AEST
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| wow, great poem, sad reaches down and grabs your soul |
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Re: Death Of An Inner Child
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by emystar on
Monday, 26th October 2009 @ 09:08:45 PM AEST
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I can tottaly relate to this. No one can never understand unless they've been there.
I've often wondered what it would have been like to give my self to the one?? freely and by choice.
This is an awesome write and fits the situation to the t.
Bless you for having the courage to write this.
huggs, blessings, healing,
emy |
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Re: Death Of An Inner Child
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by spud on
Tuesday, 27th October 2009 @ 02:05:05 AM AEST
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Hi,
Tragic ...... yet stunning in its tragedy.
Child abuse is the scourge of innocence.
Save them! Save them!
Oh, that I had a magic wand ... an all-seeing eye!
Tommy
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Re: Death Of An Inner Child
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by jaeann on
Tuesday, 27th October 2009 @ 09:45:54 AM AEST
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| this kind of pain lasts a lifetime and permeates every relationship you have ....even the one you have with yourself...of this I know....you touched a soul today..... |
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