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descry. . .
Contributed by
elle
on
Monday, 26th October 2009 @ 03:05:06 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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I await
& more
languish. . .
to flowing streams
I bow. . .
oh teacher
of mindfulness
white clouds
uninhibited
floating irrational whim
hard ground
reminder
of invioable certainty
I define. . .
but lacking description
all I can do
is roar. . .
Copyright ©
elle
... [
2009-10-26 15:05:06]
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Re: descry. . .
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by ming on
Monday, 26th October 2009 @ 03:22:32 PM AEST
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Roar! The student as the teacher as the student...Great read dear-heart.
ming |
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Re: descry. . .
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 26th October 2009 @ 03:44:34 PM AEST
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Your description was great, very vivid and
powerful.
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Re: descry. . .
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 29th October 2009 @ 09:09:34 PM AEST
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Hmmm..had to read this one a few times. I just know it gave me that feeling of fear...the fear of losing...the fear of losing someone dear and falling. Falling to the ground. Pain
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