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tongue of madness
Contributed by
ming
on
Monday, 26th October 2009 @ 09:19:02 AM in AEST
Topic:
ambiguous
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glaring white eye
of the moon
backdrop indigo
nothingness
no finish
to never
conclude
what has
no end
dreams
moving
like tumbling
colored shards
& beads
trapped
inside
a kaleidoscope
& I tumbled
with them
bright moonlight
(merely reflected
sunshine)
voltive candles
sitting naked
like some
heathen
idol
but...
living
breathing
sublime
a door
bloated moon
I find nothing
not even
stones in
my pockets
it swings open
a door
a moon
a hole for
a white rabbit
and a middle-aged
poet.
Copyright ©
ming
... [
2009-10-26 09:19:02]
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Re: tongue of madness
(User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on
Monday, 26th October 2009 @ 01:32:29 PM AEST
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One of your best I think. There were some exceptional lines and metaphors in here, in particular I liked:
'dreams
moving
like tumbling
colored shards'
'bright moonlight
(merely reflected
sunshine)
voltive candles
sitting naked
like some
heathen
idol'
Great stuff once again!
-Phil
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Re: tongue of madness
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by elle on
Monday, 26th October 2009 @ 02:22:42 PM AEST
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Fantastic!!!
I do so love your style. . . like sharing breathes.
The WORDS. . . so conscious & alive. . . so in-sync!
I tumble with them. . .
peace. . . elle :) |
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