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Tree
Contributed by
saneman
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Sunday, 25th October 2009 @ 06:44:52 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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today I saw a tree
bright orange against the backdrop
of a grey dying screen
it made me feel
sadness
but the tree was beautiful?
the tree was the key
in a lock
opened
we don't know why we feel
we just feel
Copyright ©
saneman
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2009-10-25 18:44:52]
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Re: Tree
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by shelby on
Sunday, 25th October 2009 @ 07:12:47 PM AEST
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I love tree's so of course this caught my attention right away. I loved the feeling I got while reading this.
Good work !
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Re: Tree
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by MorguesMatter on
Monday, 26th October 2009 @ 04:21:41 AM AEST
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| Trees do posses an innate beauty and peacfulness, particularly in the Autumn. Your poem didn't at all neglect that conveyance -Morgues |
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Re: Tree
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by Ambivalence on
Monday, 26th October 2009 @ 10:02:21 AM AEST
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well this is something new... i liked it :)
take care
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Re: Tree
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by saneman on
Monday, 26th October 2009 @ 01:42:03 PM AEST
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thank you for your kind words
we all need a tree |
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