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Clarity
Contributed by
b_lee
on
Sunday, 25th October 2009 @ 12:04:32 AM in AEST
Topic:
ambiguous
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The light reveals all.
Casting shadows around me, of me.
Against this crime of nature.
Or is it a way of life?
I do not know.
Who has the answers?
Do the eyes tell all?
Her eyes cast hopefulness.
But the sticky starch red blood,
oozes out on to the marble,
pure as salt.
The smell of gasoline is strong.
This haze, is it blinding me?
Should I stay to see the light?
Should I leave,
to find the answer?
I stand still and look at the light,
and quickly look away,
and then the smell of the,
sticky blood haze blinds me.
I turn and walk away.
Darkness knows all
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b_lee
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2009-10-25 00:04:32]
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Re: Clarity
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by Alexa_Bachtel on
Sunday, 25th October 2009 @ 05:18:04 AM AEST
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Good work. I love it.
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Re: Clarity
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by MorguesMatter on
Sunday, 25th October 2009 @ 11:48:30 AM AEST
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| Very vivid, I can see the body sprawled out lifelessly in a pool of blood followed by flames. |
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