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Aged
Contributed by
fortunesdancer
on
Thursday, 22nd October 2009 @ 12:07:44 PM in AEST
Topic:
dedicatedpoems
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hours of time leaping by
subtle lost aged cry
hours lost
the day we die
moving soulful silent sigh
elders shunned
time undone
my beauty lost
thy widom won
silent bitter rising sun
times of laughter times of fun
hours fleeting
time undone
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2009-10-22 12:07:44] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Aged
(User Rating: 1 ) by shelby on
Friday, 23rd October 2009 @ 06:44:50 PM AEST (User
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There are so many layers in this poem.
I loved it, the thought, the style everything.
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