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The Rest May Follow
Contributed by
jaeann
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Wednesday, 21st October 2009 @ 10:37:31 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Careening through
yesterday....
buying back tomorrow.....
grasping for today....
while banishing
the sorrow....
She liberates
her body
to free her
mind.....
a soul in search
of some fire....
her strength
is the quest that
she must find...
to have her
place somewhere
between passion
and ire....
Copyright ©
jaeann
... [
2009-10-21 22:37:31]
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Re: The Rest May Follow
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 21st October 2009 @ 11:24:20 PM AEST
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It some how all seems to intertwine, doesn't it. I wonder if while trying to banish the sorrow, she just may be hiding it.
Nicely done. Thank you for an enjoyable and interesting read.
Tim
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Re: The Rest May Follow
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by tomcio32 on
Friday, 23rd October 2009 @ 06:25:44 PM AEST
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Very nice clean poem.
Sort of simple yet unfinished.
But we all know what you mean.
Great work. |
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Re: The Rest May Follow
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by alicewhite on
Friday, 1st March 2013 @ 08:50:27 PM AEST
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| through destruction of all you think and all you are you are reborn , the fire burns and out of the ashes you are reborn like the pheonix, the harder the trials the more you suffer the more you learn the more you understand the more empathy you feel the less you judge many shoes have you walked in, the more you turn the other cheek, you die for your sins and are resurected and you are illuminated enlightened your crown of thorns becomes your halo your inner god or goddess is revealed. |
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