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In the wet

Contributed by holy on Wednesday, 21st October 2009 @ 06:59:55 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

In the wet
2008-07-15 23:08:35
In the wet

You left me in a wet evening,

standing in the rain,

I almost cried.

Looking at your back,

I wanted to call your name loudly,

but I only took some rain to feel your stay.

"Don't go out in the wet,

take care!

and have a good night!"

staring at your back,

this was only what filling my mind,

taking your affection I returned.

You gave me a necklace as a token of your affection,

I advised you to watch out for slick spots on the sidewalk.

Yes,

we were much attached to each other,

it would make sense to leave early,

or I would cry.

You left me there alone,

also left a lonely memory,

Oh,

at that moment,

I remembered we had been courting for a year,

but I forgot,

it grew darker,

and became colder.

At that wet night,

I cried again,

and hovered in my dream.

Yes,

that night,

for a good sleep,

I turned on a new song,

let a lonely and wet heart dance alone......

Copyright © holy ... [ 2009-10-21 18:59:55]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: In the wet (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_K on Wednesday, 21st October 2009 @ 08:05:04 PM AEST
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This is so sad...but so full of hope... Your English seems to be improving, Holy
Keep it up...
Hugs
Jenni

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