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The Burial Ground
Contributed by
Opium
on
Tuesday, 1st April 2003 @ 10:09:06 PM in AEST
Topic:
mystical
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The myth talks about a nightingale
Who used to narrate this dark tale
About a girl that was found
Born on the burial ground
The years began to fly
So the story passed by
A beauty living among the dead
Guiding their souls to heaven overhead
For some time I thought it was a fairytale
Until I heard the whispers of that nightingale
Murmuring in my cold ear
Some words no one else would hear
Then a ghost appeared in the mist
A charming beauty with bloody wrists
It all felt like a quiet reverie
Though her eyes held deep misery
Then the fog gently came down
She was wearing a holy gown
And we walked to the skies with no sound
But I forgot my body on the burial ground
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Opium
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2003-04-01 22:09:06]
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Re: The Burial Ground
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by DreamWeaver on
Tuesday, 1st April 2003 @ 10:25:35 PM AEST
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| Mmm interesting and eerie write... I like it very much. Love how you ended it ... Jan |
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Re: The Burial Ground
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by ladyfawn on
Wednesday, 2nd April 2003 @ 01:06:03 PM AEST
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| ooooh i love this! hugs nessa |
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Re: The Burial Ground
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by gina on
Friday, 4th April 2003 @ 05:10:16 AM AEST
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dont u always forget things habboul,
ill bring it back to u on my way :P
(hope u lost some weight)
GINGIN :P |
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Re: The Burial Ground
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by wolfflow on
Sunday, 6th April 2003 @ 05:29:03 AM AEST
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| a wonderful read, i really enjoyed it |
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Re: The Burial Ground
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Sunday, 6th April 2003 @ 06:44:34 AM AEST
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Awww..this is so beautiful..... I love it!!!!
Jenni |
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