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Strangled
Contributed by
lesoleilnoire
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Wednesday, 21st October 2009 @ 04:47:22 PM in AEST
Topic:
Haiku
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Invisible hands,
squeezing the breath out of me,
one last breath remains
Copyright ©
lesoleilnoire
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2009-10-21 16:47:22]
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Re: Strangled
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by Jenni_K on
Wednesday, 21st October 2009 @ 05:35:36 PM AEST
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Great visuals, Heidi.. Nice one...
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Re: Strangled
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by Ambivalence on
Wednesday, 21st October 2009 @ 07:56:34 PM AEST
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invisible hands... scary.
take care
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Re: Strangled
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 23rd October 2009 @ 01:21:46 AM AEST
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Welcome to the dark side.
Yeeesh, I could feel the muscles in my throat tightening. Power with so few words.
Thank you for an enjoyable and, uh, choking read.
Tim
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