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don't know how
Contributed by
3RIC1469
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Wednesday, 21st October 2009 @ 11:59:11 AM in AEST
Topic:
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Someone save me from my mundane!
Someone tell me I am alright,
That someone used to be me but now I am tired.
Everyone hold my inside downward slide,
Everyone tell me where to hide,
There’s nowhere left for you to reside.
No one will know why
No one see’s the dimming sky
I feel one last slip and fall into tomorrows light.
You ask me to smile, I tell you I forgot how.
You ask me to live, I tell you just for a while.
You tell me it’s almost over, I say if you only knew.
Shattered souls remain an infinite toll.
Corrupted cross members and the life it kills.
One last time I look back at you, it was me that couldn’t see,
How I scattered the life I once had!
10-21-2009
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Re: don't know how
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by longhaircg on
Wednesday, 21st October 2009 @ 01:13:53 PM AEST
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wow I feel your pain, Ive made mistakes to like most people do. but your write was very good keep writing
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Re: don't know how
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by 3RIC1469 on
Wednesday, 21st October 2009 @ 02:33:18 PM AEST
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Re: don't know how
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by shelby on
Wednesday, 21st October 2009 @ 08:19:03 PM AEST
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I felt each tender word. Nicely written.
Hang in there it will get better, I say it everyday hang in hang in.
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