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trying to escape the loneliness
Contributed by
faffeee
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Tuesday, 1st April 2003 @ 09:52:40 PM in AEST
Topic:
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strange to feel so lonely, looking round these happy faces
an emptyness stretches to deepest unknown places
a numbing ache creeps in swiftly at the slightest chance
it settles on my heart and i know its here to last
i find anger and resent in other's pure joy
find tears and desperation in the softest sigh
pain comes now, too often and too deep
memories flicker and they never leave me
to feel alone, just wanting protection
all i want is strong arms, to give tender affection
pretending to be happy in a life without love
waiting with dying faith, and a crying heart
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Re: trying to escape the loneliness
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 2nd April 2003 @ 10:31:34 AM AEST
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| i like your poem alot :) i wish no one would feel this way. i too am wanting what you want. |
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Re: trying to escape the loneliness
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by faffeee on
Wednesday, 2nd April 2003 @ 02:04:38 PM AEST
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| thanks!! im gonna look for some of your stuff!! i hope u find it - what we both want! xxx |
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Re: trying to escape the loneliness
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by wolfflow on
Sunday, 20th April 2003 @ 03:41:56 PM AEST
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| the honest feeling in this expression is simply beautiful. |
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Re: trying to escape the loneliness
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by razorbladerose on
Tuesday, 29th April 2003 @ 08:23:14 AM AEST
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| Well....you have sumed up much of how i feel! I really like the way you have expressed yourself in this write.Brilliant! |
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Re: trying to escape the loneliness
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by crossmyheartwithaknife on
Tuesday, 3rd June 2003 @ 08:52:47 PM AEST
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| great poem! ive felt like this alot of times. pretending to be happy in a life without love <- i have a habit or trying to make myself happy or pretend to be just so it seems to everyone that i am happy. |
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Re: trying to escape the loneliness
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by squeesh on
Sunday, 14th September 2003 @ 05:10:03 PM AEST
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hey you read my poem and left a message saying you wrote something along the same lines so i thought i'd check it out. its really sad and it sux that we have to go through all this pain and devestation but you're right it is nice to know that someone else is going through the same thing
~squeesh |
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