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I won't
Contributed by
joshsmithx59x
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Monday, 19th October 2009 @ 04:51:02 PM in AEST
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You see right through me
As I stand here
Im right infront of you
Though you stare blindly
Soon you'll see
You've become astray
I tried to guide you
You went your own way
I won't follow
I won't fight for you
I won't look back
I won't regret
I won't forget
As we go our seperate ways
I'll take time to remember you
It's not the way I wanted it
I'll always be here
You won't come back
It could never be
The only thing I ever wanted
Was you
Copyright ©
joshsmithx59x
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2009-10-19 16:51:02]
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Re: I won't
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by shelby on
Monday, 19th October 2009 @ 07:09:06 PM AEST
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This is lovely and so filled with your heart.
Loved the verse, so sorry for the loss.
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Re: I won't
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by LevyMetal on
Monday, 19th October 2009 @ 10:05:23 PM AEST
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Was this easy for you to right? I feel like this is a poem where it just naturally and organically poured out with little thought... which is of course amazing because its true emotion. love this part:
I won't regret
I won't forget
very nice indeed. I would love to see you give this poem another try and this time try to push some more emotion out. Its interesting to see what happens when you force emotion with something that is already so emotionally charged. |
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