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vulnerable. . .
Contributed by
elle
on
Monday, 19th October 2009 @ 10:49:27 AM in AEST
Topic:
ambiguous
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crouched down
low
in abrupt shadowings
I exhume
(from curled in, tightly)
this viscid
enert
offering
given over. . .
to a willing heart
capable
of resuscitation
Copyright ©
elle
... [
2009-10-19 10:49:27]
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Re: vulnerable. . .
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 19th October 2009 @ 05:39:59 PM AEST
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I think the sense of vulnerability this carries is what makes it so powerful and the idea so daring.
A toss of the dice, like everything else in life. Sometimes you win; sometimes you lose. If you don't play, though, you can never win. |
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Re: vulnerable. . .
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 20th October 2009 @ 10:27:32 PM AEST
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Step back, jump up, go for it!!!
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