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statuesque
Contributed by
spike
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Monday, 19th October 2009 @ 03:55:00 AM in AEST
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Cast in silence
on her throne
amongst the living,
petrified, as all within her
ossified, from fears born of
phantom thoughts and scornful pride:
the origins all but lost to a
hazy sense of righteous zeal,
refusing all old wounds to heal.
He too, across the way
baked by sun and desert winds
heart hardened by many sins
reaching forth with marbled hand
across the shifting seas of sand,
vision fixed within the eyes
he silently stands
agonising their great divide:
they were stately once,
before they died.
Copyright ©
spike
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2009-10-19 03:55:00]
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Re: statuesque
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by elle on
Monday, 19th October 2009 @ 03:14:30 PM AEST
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| Chillingly smooth. . . elle :) |
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Re: statuesque
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by Ambivalence on
Monday, 19th October 2009 @ 04:02:39 PM AEST
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so vivid with your words. what a sad short story... this is heavily LOADED with meaning. well done
take care
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Re: statuesque
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by shelby on
Monday, 19th October 2009 @ 06:48:08 PM AEST
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Beautiful and sad.
I loved it, the ending brought chills.
Hugs
Michelle |
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Re: statuesque
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by emystar on
Tuesday, 20th October 2009 @ 09:58:12 PM AEST
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Sad yet very creative.
Good work.
huggd, blessings,
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