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GOING STUPID DUEY DUMB
Contributed by
PONYCAT
on
Sunday, 18th October 2009 @ 10:05:12 PM in AEST
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I shaky baky, in my own mistaky,
try to pull a faky, but they know im flaky.
found out life is crazy, it doesn't even phase me_
my job dont even pay me.
lets all figure out that it is'nt even real
and they'll give it all away so we'll never have to steal.
onward ho said the jackal to the po.
come and get your ears while these nails scratch your nose.. .
we all fall down cuz
were nothin but some clowns.
little people runnin round
in somthing like a town,
brainwashed to believe that no money makes a frown.
killin all your dreams just so you can wear that crown.
-Barn
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PONYCAT
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2009-10-18 22:05:12]
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Re: GOING STUPID DUEY DUMB
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by Spike on
Monday, 19th October 2009 @ 02:07:02 AM AEST
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great metre, bold rhyming, and demands a re-read. best social commentary of the week.
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Re: GOING STUPID DUEY DUMB
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by shelby on
Monday, 19th October 2009 @ 07:15:32 PM AEST
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The beginning made me smile.
It is different from what I am used to reading but I liked it.
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