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drip. . .
Contributed by
elle
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Sunday, 18th October 2009 @ 09:29:16 AM in AEST
Topic:
obsession
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envious of you
insulating & consecrating
complete
as you flow through me, rush over me
slow me, get to know me
stupendous in your ability
my head
in your clouds
Copyright ©
elle
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2009-10-18 09:29:16]
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Re: drip. . .
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 18th October 2009 @ 10:46:08 AM AEST
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Excellence is definitely your forte.
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Re: drip. . .
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by PONYCAT on
Sunday, 18th October 2009 @ 09:54:23 PM AEST
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I liked these parts the best, first part here sounds real nice...
as you flow through me, rush over me
slow me, get to know me
my head
in your clouds
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Re: drip. . .
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by Spike on
Monday, 19th October 2009 @ 02:34:57 AM AEST
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Indeed I am, envious. Top notch liquid silk, made word.
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